My Minimoog is being sent tomorrow, I just wrote to beg it be packed with love - memories of that SK20 still haven't gone away. I'm sure the guy know what he's doing and I'm just fussing as usual.
Sent in a review this morning and making progress with the others I have in hand ready for more stuff to come. I may even get some music written this week using some of the new sounds I reviewed recently - may as well!
What I'd love to do is dig into the novel since it's at that stage I like best: pretty much there apart from the smoothing. What I do is go through it a chapter at a time in order, streamlining the grammar, deleting anything that slows down the pace or gets too explainy or just is laboured or dull. At the same time I'm looking for cheap gags to throw in, vocab to improve, maybe some topping and tailing of chapters, perhaps even - gasp - descriptive passages. It's still acres of dialogue sat on a wafer-thin plot sat on top of a stupidly complex idea that can barely be seen for the fart jokes. Ah, sophistication wherefore art thou?
Today I also filled the punch-man and gave him a short lesson. I'll probably ache tomorrow being old and feeble now so I didn't overdo it.
Should I add a recent pic? I think I'll loook.....
that's Tim's BTW...
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